Thursday, December 9, 2010

homework 21- comments

for matthews blog:

hey, i just read your post and i think that you really went into depth about everything. to me, it seems like you could really relate to her because you was talking about your uncle and your experience with when you had to say your final goodbyes. that made the post a little more personal.
i think maybe to go a little deeper with it, you could have answered your own question. for example, how do you think you would have handeled the situation where your wife had died. would you still sleep in the same house, or bed? would you move on and try to love again? put yourself in that situation.

for rigels blog:

i thought that your post had a lot of meaning to it. it sounds like you pretty much sumed up everything she had spoken about. i liked how you talked about how she wanted to take care of him, and when he died in the house, it was as if they were together from beginning to end. and that is a very good way to see it as. it brings out the true meaning of wedding vowels. till death due us part.
for your next post, maybe you could talk about another situation that could be related to what the speaker was talking about. it could be something from what we talked about in class, to something someone had talked to you about personally once before.

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