homework 44

ariel: i read your paper, and i thought that it was very good. it talked about how one of your little sisters were born, and the struggles that your mother went through to deliver her. it must have been really hard for her and your dad to be under that kind of pressure. but now she is a healthy girl and that is a blessing. i liked how you connected what we learned in class to a personal experience as well as talk about a side of birth we didnt really cover much on. we didnt really talk much about premature births and the complications it brings. maybe for next time, you could probably add some statistics about premature births around the U.S. and how common or uncommon they are. rigel: yours too was a personal topic that i really enjoyed. your topic was about single mothers. i felt like i could personally relate to that because my mom too is also a single mother, and she struggles everyday to make sure i have everything i need and that i grow up into a good kid. it too was a topic we didnt even bring up in class at all so to get information on that was very interesting and is a reason why i turned to your blog. i feel like there are a lot of single mothers out there in the world and the guys usually dont do anything. maybe something you coud do for next time is maybe relate it to yourself a little more and talk about a personal experience. stephen: you got me very interested in reading your paper when you made your speech. it was very engaging and caught my attention. in your paper you talked about multiple side of births in a hospital and out of a hospital. as well as with a midwife or with a doctor. it was good that you went a little deeper into what we learned about in class. but maybe for next time you could focus on maybe one part of the arguments or maybe narrow your topic down a bit. also maybe add some personal opinions you had.